The Mark Agency has been crowned the winner of the 2024 Gruen Pitch, a prestigious competition featured on the ABC television program Gruen, with a poetry-inspired advertisement for the State of Origin rugby league series. The agency's creative concept, which centered on the theme of poetry, captivated the judges and earned them the top prize.
How the Winning Ad Came Together
For the pitch, The Mark Agency was tasked with developing a campaign that would reignite interest in the State of Origin series, which has seen a decline in viewership among younger demographics. The agency's solution was a series of short, poetic spots that highlighted the rivalry and passion of the event. According to agency co-founder Mark McCraith, the idea was to tap into the emotional core of the competition. "We wanted to create something that felt authentic and unexpected, something that would cut through the noise of typical sports advertising," McCraith said.
The ad features spoken-word poetry over footage of iconic State of Origin moments, blending the raw energy of the game with the artistry of verse. The judges praised the campaign for its originality and emotional resonance, noting that it successfully modernized the brand without losing its traditional appeal.
Judges' Reactions and Industry Impact
The Gruen Pitch panel, which includes advertising experts and past winners, was unanimous in its decision. Judge and advertising veteran Jane Caro described the winning entry as "a breath of fresh air" and commended the agency for taking a risk. "It's easy to fall back on clichés in sports advertising, but The Mark Agency went in a completely different direction and it paid off," Caro said.
The win has already generated significant buzz for The Mark Agency, which is based in Sydney. Industry insiders predict that the victory will lead to new business opportunities and solidify the agency's reputation for creative excellence. The agency's portfolio includes work for major brands such as Qantas and Telstra, and the Gruen Pitch win is expected to further elevate its profile.
Behind the Scenes of the Creative Process
The Mark Agency's team spent weeks researching the cultural significance of State of Origin and exploring unconventional angles. The poetry concept emerged from a brainstorming session where the team discussed the idea of the game as a modern-day epic. "We realized that the best way to capture the drama and intensity was through the rhythm and emotion of poetry," said creative director Sarah Jenkins. The final product was a collaboration between copywriters, poets, and video editors, resulting in a cohesive and striking campaign.
The agency also conducted focus groups to test the ads, finding that the poetry resonated strongly with both die-hard fans and those less familiar with the sport. One participant described the ad as "chilling and powerful," while another noted that it made them feel "proud to be a Queenslander or New South Welshman."
What the Win Means for The Mark Agency
Winning the Gruen Pitch is a significant achievement in the Australian advertising industry, often leading to increased visibility and client interest. The Mark Agency plans to use the momentum to expand its creative team and pursue larger campaigns. McCraith emphasized that the win validates the agency's commitment to bold, storytelling-driven advertising. "This is a testament to our belief that great advertising is about connecting with people on an emotional level, not just selling a product," he said.
The winning ad will air during the State of Origin series, giving the agency widespread exposure. Additionally, The Mark Agency will receive a cash prize and the coveted Gruen Pitch trophy.
Broader Trends in Advertising
The success of The Mark Agency's poetry-themed ad reflects a broader trend in advertising toward more artistic and narrative-driven content. As audiences become increasingly skeptical of traditional advertising, brands are turning to creative approaches that feel more like entertainment than promotion. The Gruen Pitch itself has become a platform for showcasing such innovation, with past winners including campaigns that used humor, nostalgia, and interactive elements.
Industry experts believe that the poetry ad could inspire other agencies to experiment with literary and artistic forms in their work. "This win shows that there's an appetite for risk-taking and creativity in advertising," said marketing professor Dr. Emily Tran. "It's a reminder that the best ads are often the ones that surprise us."
Looking Ahead
The Mark Agency is already in talks with several potential clients who have expressed interest in similar campaigns. The agency is also considering expanding the poetry concept into a broader series of ads for other sports or events. For now, the team is relishing the victory and the recognition that comes with it. "We're incredibly proud of what we've achieved," McCraith said. "And we're excited to see where this takes us."



